I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Ruqayat this Viena your classmate. I really love how you did you argumentation writing. your work is amazing but can you write more words next time.
Hi Ruqayat this is Ellakaye here. This is a very creative piece of writing you have done on should dogs be allowed on public transports argumention writing, I found out some really good resons why dogs should be allowed on public transports and why dogs shouldn't be allowed on public transports just from reading your agurmention writing. I was wondering if you think that dogs should be allowed on public transports? Keep up the good work Ruqayat!
Hi Ruqayat this Viena your classmate. I really love how you did you argumentation writing. your work is amazing but can you write more words next time.
ReplyDeleteYou raise great points Ruqayat. Keep it up the great work!
ReplyDeleteHi Ruqayat this is Ellakaye here. This is a very creative piece of writing you have done on should dogs be allowed on public transports argumention writing, I found out some really good resons why dogs should be allowed on public transports and why dogs shouldn't be allowed on public transports just from reading your agurmention writing. I was wondering if you think that dogs should be allowed on public transports? Keep up the good work Ruqayat!
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