I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
This task was making a poem about summer. It was very quick and easy. Some of the stuff written down on this poem did not actually occur in real life. Happy Holidays!
Great job on this task, your summer poem sounds great and the picture is really cool. I love the way you have phrased your poem as if it's winter or some other time and you are remembering back to the summer that's been. It almost sounds sad, like you miss it and are fondly wishing for it.
Great stuff Ruqayat, See you later in the comments,
Hey Ruqayat,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on this task, your summer poem sounds great and the picture is really cool. I love the way you have phrased your poem as if it's winter or some other time and you are remembering back to the summer that's been. It almost sounds sad, like you miss it and are fondly wishing for it.
Great stuff Ruqayat,
See you later in the comments,
Daniel
Hello Daniel thank you for commenting on my blog. I really appreciate it. What would you write for your poem? Happy Holidays!
DeleteKind Regards ~
Ruqayat