For this activity we had to make a haiku poem. A haiku poem is a poem that contains 17 syllables in total. 5 syllables on the first line. 7 on the second line. And lastly 5 on the third on. My one was based on a windy day. What theme would you do for your haiku poem?
Kia ora Ruqayat,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
I really enjoyed this haiku activity as I love to read poetry and I think haikus are a very fun form of poetry with their syllable rules and simplicity.
Your haiku is well written, you followed the 5, 7, 5 syllable rule perfectly and I think your theme is very lovely. I like that the colors and image you used matched the theme of your haiku and added more depth.
If you wanted to step up your work you could write a few more haikus and include a video of yourself reading them aloud.
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates
Bula Vinaka Zana. Thank you for you comment. It is much appreciated. I will make sure to keep you suggestions in mind so in future post I can use them. What would your haiku poem be about?
ReplyDeleteKind regards ~
Ruqayat
Hi Ruqayat,
DeleteI like to write haiku poems about what I can see like whats outside my window, what my friend is doing etc. Like taking a picture of the moment but in the form of a poem.
-Zana