I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Ruqayat, thank you for publishing your narrative! I love how you have used language to create a contrast between the two dimensions. Next time I would suggest choosing a font that uses lower case and capital letters so that you can practice proofreading for these.
Kia ora Ruqayat, thank you for publishing your narrative! I love how you have used language to create a contrast between the two dimensions. Next time I would suggest choosing a font that uses lower case and capital letters so that you can practice proofreading for these.
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