I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora:Ruqayat i was reading your Descriptive Writing as i was reading it it made feel like i was really on the ice. i really liked reading your descriptive writing. Jasmine I really hope you keep your good writing up and have a great Weekend off school. and one big thank you for helping me do my fractions in Maths. Bye. :)
Kia ora Ruqayat this writin g is cool and nice your backround is very nice. see you later bye
ReplyDeleteKia Ora:Ruqayat i was reading your Descriptive Writing as i was reading it it made feel like i was really on the ice. i really liked reading your descriptive writing.
ReplyDeleteJasmine I really hope you keep your good writing up and have a great Weekend off school. and one big thank you for helping me do my fractions in Maths. Bye. :)
Kia ora Ruqa I really like how you put Similies in your writing,you really did an Amazing job on your writing,
ReplyDeleteGood job!