I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ka mau te wehi, awesome work on your descriptive writing Ruqayat! I thoroughly enjoyed how connected the beauty of the poppies to the tragedies of war. One suggestion for next time is to write in present tense (as if it is happening right now). You have done a fantastic job this week, well done.
Ka mau te wehi, awesome work on your descriptive writing Ruqayat! I thoroughly enjoyed how connected the beauty of the poppies to the tragedies of war. One suggestion for next time is to write in present tense (as if it is happening right now). You have done a fantastic job this week, well done.
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